Week 7: My advice to you

From Group 3, Class 75

For paragraph 3, Seok-Jun, I think your arriving early has more benefits than shortcomings, and I rather recommend others to be like that than not to be. Anything can happen on your way to appointed places and I think it will be a nice preparation for any accidents you encounter. If that's your way to be impetuous, I think it's better for you to have it. If the habit makes you to be exhausted, I think there could be a plenty of ways not to get tired while waiting for someone who you promised to meet with. For example, you could use that intermission to watch a movie if you have a smart phone, or to listen to music or so. In my case, if I have some time left when waiting for someone, I usually imagine about what I want to make in future like illustration book and movies. That activity prevents me from being tired and I'm quiet sure that you would not be tired again with activities I recommended above or other activities you would love to do.

To Yoon Seok Jun

Week 6: Persuasive Topic Building and Response

I want to see movies.

I need time.

I want to change my life style.

I want to see movies.

I am expecting to see three upcoming movies after mid-term, which are Fast and Furious, When Marnie Was There, and Tomorrowland. The first movie I am expecting to see is Fast and Furious because I like the last two movies from the franchise for its wonderful action and expecting this would give me the same pleasure. The second movie I am delighted to watch is When Marnie Was There which is a last film from Ghibli Studio and I am hoping to see this film to commemorate and to be a part of the finale due to my affection to the works by Ghibli. The last movie I would like to watch is Tomorrowland because the promising premise of the movie, which is going to tell about imaginary land of Tomorrowland, made me to wonder how the movie is going to express and show its imagination.

I need time
I need to get some time to work on three activities that I expected myself to do in university which is drawing, studying literature, and participating on making movies. The first activity I need time to do is drawing, which is an activity I want to increase proficiency on because of my plan to make an illustration book about everyday life of animals in an animal village. The second activity I need time to do is expanding my knowledge on literature which is crucial to literary value of illustration book I am going to make. The last activity that I need time to participate on is making movies which I have dreamed for long time because of wonder it gave but failed to do so due to lack of time.

I want to change my life style.
I would like to change my three life styles which is being messy, inactive, and worrying too much into different ones which is being neat, active, and confident. First life style I want to change is my messy life style whose examples would be leaving important works until the due date and not cleaning my room systematically and because I used to be a well-kept person, I want to change this life style into neat one. Second life style I want to change is my current inactive character which is unhelpful to any of my works I am planning to do and I want to be active to achieve what I want to do. The last life style I am hoping to change is apprehension I have in my heart due to anxiety about future and I want to change it because this is halting me from moving forward into my dreams.